TFSoL - Page 25

JESUS CHRIST LOOK AT THAT FUCKING BACKGROUND I'm pretty much legally retarded.
Everything apart from panels one and two isn't too bad. I even like Henry's face in panel one.
I tried to give him a cute arse but I failed. Mentally replace it with a bum of your choice.

I don't know whether you can tell from this page, but you'll see in future chapters that Alain does a lot of oggling to compensate for his lack of touching.

I can't wait to get past chapter one (ten more pages!) because dialogues and situations are so much better in later chapters.
Oh the story has six chapters plus epilogue, if you were curious.